Outtakes from The Song of Sourwood Mountain

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 4 Comments

When writing a book, I, as do all writers, need to keep the focus on the main story and not slide off into side scenes. Sometimes I see these scenes when I’m editing and sometimes my editor points them out. The scenes and paragraphs of extra information aren’t bad, just not necessary to the story. I don’t want a reader …

More Outtakes from When the Meadow Blooms

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 16 Comments

Sienna and Calla were my young sisters in my recent release, When the Meadow Blooms. I always enjoy seeing one of my stories through a child’s or a young person’s eyes. This one was no different. The girls are 9 and 14 at the beginning of the story and Calla is definitely a big sister. She wants to help Sienna …

Outtakes from When the Meadow Blooms

Ann H GabhartAnn's Posts, One Writer's Journal 8 Comments

Only a couple more weeks until the release of my new book, When the Meadow Blooms. So I thought this would be a good time to share some outakes or scenes cut from the book before it was published. I sometimes tend to be wordier than necessary. I know you all can’t believe that! But some scenes are better without quite as …